Designed my first consultation landing page. Roast it 🔥
Hey guys,
Till now, I have designed a handful of landing pages, but never designed one for my consultation.
Since it is my first one, I took a week to complete it. I changed the layout, re designed the hero section for a couple of times and I'm bit sceptical on the messaging.
So, now I'm looking to impriove the messaging of the landing page.
Please check out the landing page and share your feedback in the comments 👇
Interesting agency/consulting biz. There really is opportunity everywhere!
I think your value prop needs to come across more. You're not selling planning you're selling a successful launch. That needs to come across more.
I annotated some more thoughts here
Good luck!
Yeah, we also thought that but a bit confused on how to craft a headline for it. Any thoughts?
Also, thanks a lot for taking your time and giving your suggestions on the first fold 🤗
I don't have the answer, but think of this from the prospect's point of view:
The above the fold should focus on the prospect's perspective, not yours. As a prospect, I don't want to plan, I want to get more upvotes.
Spitballing a few ideas
If these sound aggressive, that's because they are. Ofc, you'd need to back this all up. But you're the pros, right?
Finally, I, as a prospect, don't care about your service. I care about me. I'd remove 'Product Hunt Wizards' from the headline
Makes sense, thanks for your inputs man. Will try something on these lines.
Looks good! What stuck out to me were some grammar issues that'd be easy quick wins fix: The weird capitalisation of 'You', inconsistent capitalisation in your accordions at the bottom, and some missing spaces between full stops and the following sentence in testimonials.
Just some simple stuff that might erode the perception you give of being professional and detail-oriented. Looks like you've got some good feedback on messaging overall too. Also, I agree with the comment on the logos with white backgrounds looking a bit odd - maybe just put them in a full-width white banner.
Thanks for the suggestion.
Will work on the capiralization and yeah will try to put them in a white banner. it's a good idea
Love the CTA color/animation
Thanks a lot Cubic 🤗
nice
Thanks a lot Zike 🤗
Great landing page Karthik!
Thanks a lot man 🤗
I would just rephrase "Bonus: Done for you checklist to plan your PH launch".
Good job with the LP!
Makes sense, thanks for the suggestion 🤗
In my opinion you to many colors and the red doest go with the purple, I like sticking to 1/2 accent colors and make sure they go well. try checking out coolers or color hunt for amazing pallets.
Could use black background with white text for logos under "previous launches" and "worked with"
good looking website. I build mine using wix :-) and its background is white. Hope I can build something like this for my other business in the future.
Any numbers on how well companies do with you vs without you?
Very organized landing page! One way to make it more interactive is embedding a GPT bot to answer your visitors' questions anytime: https://www.dearai.online/Landing
Let me know if you are interested in! We are happy to provide special free plan.
Thanks man.
Will check it out and let you know.
Sure, happy to help anytime!