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Destroy my landing page. Be harsh

rippedrich.com

A newsletter.

I'm building a subscriber base before sending the first email

Roast it 🔥

on February 8, 2023
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    -Hero section doesn't show a ripped rich
    -Hero section doesn't make me feel the website is ripped or rich
    -Grammar errors in hero section
    -Substack picture could use an update
    -Font styling in the next section makes most of the text hard to read without highlighting any key information for easy scanning/skimming
    -In the who am I you talk about yourself but don't mention a firm goal you have

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      Love it!! Thanks