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Did a face lift to my landing page

Would greatly appreciate any and all feedback - thanks!

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Landing Page Feedback
on October 4, 2023
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    Hi @Arsawatt, great job on the easy and compelling call-to-action landing page. Some things caught my eye:

    • Inconsistency in illustrations - I would recommend changing the pictures for "Precious Metals," "Security," and "Multiple Currencies" that you've chosen. Since you're introducing a "new" personal finance app, it's essential to showcase freshness. I suggest replacing them with 3D-rendered icons, which you can easily find, and it will freshen up the overall look.
    • Possible bug - regarding the "features" section, I observed some strange behavior when clicking on the "Net Worth" item.

    Overall, it looks good and fresh - just being precise about details. Good luck!

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    Hi @Arsawatt, here is my honest and first look feedback- Too colourful try sticking with 1-2 color max, scrolling feels tight, the navigation menu is not properly aligned. The logo can be better with a name as well. It's hard to know what the company name is without looking at the domain itself. Too much empty spaces in hero section and below footer section. "No Frills Personal Finance, Break free from the spreadsheet tar pit" is hard to understand or make sense of. try using easy to understand and catchy words like "Your personal finance, Now made easy" or "Personal finance delivered quickly".

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    For me, the phrase "No Frills Personal Finance" isn't clear about what the product is, I would need to continue looking at screenshots to understand. Furthermore, some of the illustrations don't have a consistent quality or style. It might be better if they all followed the same aesthetic.

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