Landing Page Feedback January 6, 2020

Discount in buy button

Pascal Precht @PascalPrecht

The ones who are following my project https://rebase-book.com know that I constantly fine-tune the landing page and try to iteratively improve it.

After talking to a friend today I've put the price of the product in the label of the buy button, including the discount price.

In addition, I've also added information that the price is excluding VAT.

What do you think? As always, general feedback for the landing page is very welcome!

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    Why not add snippets of your book in the landing page weaved around a story that may speak to your target audience (I'm part of that audience). Instead of a "click here for sample" link. That's my personal opinion. I like to see people take a personal touch with their product presentations so you know it's uniquely theirs.

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      That is a very interesting idea @sodux !

      Will have to play around with the copy to make that work.

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    Left some thoughts on Twitter: https://twitter.com/LeviNunnink/status/1214261690444865536

    I think putting the price and discount in the buy button is a good idea. Nice work!

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      Damn @levinunnink that is extremely valuable feedback!

      Thank you so much for taking the time and putting all of this actionable stuff together!
      Can I offer you a free copy of the book as a token of my gratitude?

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        Woah! I'd love a copy thank you! :-)

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          @levinunnink Is the email on your website still state-of-the-art? :)

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            It is indeed.

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    Great simple layout overall.
    I feel you have too many disclaimer and such.

    https://i.imgur.com/M3olmZg.png

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      Thank you @reza !

      Using a banner instead and moving some things around is really good feedback!!
      Will do that ASAP