DiscoverPlanGo landing page feedback

I just released my marketting site for DiscoverPlanGo and I'm not a designer and not a copy writer but have a passion to learn both things so I would love some feedback on how I have done and what I could do to improve going forward.

DiscoverPlanGo is my side project idea that one day will become profitable enough for it not to be my side project. The goal is to create a set of tools which will help people plan holidays better by keeping everything that you need in one place. I'm also hoping I can build a community around this so people can tailor their own holidays based on other people experiences.

The most frustrating thing about going to a travel agent is that I always felt I wasn't getting the best value for money and for a holiday which only partly fitted what I liked doing. It always takes so much time to plan though and we often forgot about things, or had to change our plans last minute which took a long time again.