Do you understand my landing page part 2?

Here's my thoughts:

On my PC, there is very little padding on the top and bottom of the page. Give it a bit more space. Let it breathe.
The iPhone mockup is squished. Make sure you fix that.
The sign up and contact buttons should pop out. Not blend in.
The main title should catch people's attention and sum up your app. The title is just "Livicine" and that doesn't tell me anything.

I'd like to help you with these changes. I have a couple app themes that I sell for a low cost right now on buildfaster.co which would be good for your product.

They are:

SimplyApp: https://buildfaster.co/productinfo/simplyapp.html
Reach the Grid: https://buildfaster.co/productinfo/reach_the_grid.html

Let me know what you think. I'd be happy to answer your questions!

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Here's my thoughts:
- On my PC, there is very little padding on the top and bottom of the page. Give it a bit more space. Let it breathe.
- The iPhone mockup is squished. Make sure you fix that.
- The sign up and contact buttons should pop out. Not blend in.
- The main title should catch people's attention and sum up your app. The title is just "Livicine" and that doesn't tell me anything.
I'd like to help you with these changes. I have a couple app themes that I sell for a low cost right now on buildfaster.co which would be good for your product.

They are:
- SimplyApp: https://buildfaster.co/productinfo/simplyapp.html
- Reach the Grid: https://buildfaster.co/productinfo/reach_the_grid.html
Let me know what you think. I'd be happy to answer your questions!
BraydenTW

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6 years ago
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