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Do you understand what I am doing?

by Mateopp

Hello, I am trying to sell a smart way to sell products on marketplaces, this ismy landing page, it has been a challenge to express what I want to say. So please Roast my website , I need to learn about it.

https://shiivi.vercel.app/

Thanks

Mateopp's avatarMateopp
on April 29, 2023
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    Honestly, I didn't get much of what you are trying to say. If it is a novel idea for an emerging trend, maybe provide more context and educate the visitor? I'm really curious, so feel free send some articles to understand better your idea.

    I've added couple of comments for you to consider here - https://visualdebug.com/show/shiivi.vercel.app

    StanD's avatar StanD
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    3 years ago
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      Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it! Sorry if my idea wasn't clear enough, I'll try to provide more context and education on the topic. I'll also check out the comments you left on the link you shared and take them into consideration. Thanks again for your input!

      Mateopp's avatar Mateopp
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      3 years ago
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        Sure, please ping me when you add more stuff and I'll be happy to review the updated version.

        StanD's avatar StanD
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    I understood. But that may be because I've been reading about a similar topic.

    This report (https://explore.averydennison.com/gwi-report-2023/p/1) discusses a similar process and the reasons behind it using physical or printed tags attached to merchandise. So authentication for resale, etc. is trending. I recommending reading the report to gain ideas for language you can use in your marketing collateral.

    Parker_Content's avatar Parker_Content
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    3 years ago
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      Got it, thanks for letting me know! . Thanks for sharing that report with me, I'll definitely give it a read and see if there are any ideas I can use to improve my marketing language.

      Mateopp's avatar Mateopp
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    Well, the part "above the fold" doesn't quite communicate yet what it is you sell. I had to read on through below to figure out what it actually was that was being sold. So I'd recommend really zooming in on that initial content and making sure it clearly explains what it is you're selling. Good luck 👍🏻

    jenskooij's avatar jenskooij
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      Thanks a lot for your feedback. It helps me a lot

      Mateopp's avatar Mateopp
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