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Do you understand what my app does?

by Hendy Saint-Jusna

Creworth

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 on June 30, 2021
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    The headline “a pocket version of linkedin” is a bit confusing for me since LinkedIn already has a mobile app, so that really is my pocket version of LinkedIn. I’d recommend using a headline that shows a clear benefit for the user for how Creworth can help them.

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      Okay. I wanted to say similar to but I think you right.

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    Hello Hendy,
    I'd advise to change the text at the bottom from "Questions or feedbacks?" to "Questions or feedback?"
    I get the gist, this is like: "you're the eight people you're closest to", which would be impressive if the person is Jeff Bezos and he's closest to Warren Buffet, Bill Gates, Elon Musk, and so forth. It is less impressive for the average Joe Schmoe, since the average person won't have the most impressive connections.
    I'm curious who is your target audience?
    Also how does the viewer validate that the displayed connections are real? What is the recruitment process?

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      Thank you for you response. The people you are connected with don't need to be Jeff Bezos or Beyonce. You entourage can be valuable to some in a local level (school,city,country) but irrevelent to the rest of world. It depends on where you at and what you need at the moment.

      Each users are signed in and linked with a social network (insta, twitter, linkedin). Social newtork profiles are kinda unique, you can see if the person is the real one. That fix the problem I guess. We have a check mark system too.

      I was aiming for entrepreneurs in general but I think I'll narrow the field and focus on entertainers.

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    For me: not really. I understand you need to ask for 8 friends and that you'll have a unique URL but that's all…

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      Ok thanks for your observation :) .

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