I like the idea. Personally I skipped past the video on my first skim of the page - and actually this is the nicest way to see how the product works, so I think you could add something to tempt people to watch the video immediately like "Here's how it works -->".
The video itself took about 3-5 minutes to play through for me because it was constantly buffering. I lost interest and gave up waiting. It looks like you're hosting the video yourself which may be the reason for it loading slowly? If I watch the video on your chrome extension page (the YouTube hosted version) then it plays all the way through with no buffering.
The big image at the bottom of the page (showing comments on the Sentry landing page) is the image that made me understand what the product is. I think this should be higher up the page. Personally I think step 1 of "how it works" could be much smaller, because step 2 is what I was looking for.
A couple of small grammatical issues:
"How does it works?" should be "How it works" or "How does it work?"
"Share the link and start gathering comment" should be "Share the link and start gathering comments"
"100 new pages by month" should be "100 new pages per month"
One more minor point - I didn't see the "Chrome" download link at first. I assumed "Install" from the line "Install the extension" was going to be a link to install it.
I like the idea. Personally I skipped past the video on my first skim of the page - and actually this is the nicest way to see how the product works, so I think you could add something to tempt people to watch the video immediately like "Here's how it works -->".
The video itself took about 3-5 minutes to play through for me because it was constantly buffering. I lost interest and gave up waiting. It looks like you're hosting the video yourself which may be the reason for it loading slowly? If I watch the video on your chrome extension page (the YouTube hosted version) then it plays all the way through with no buffering.
The big image at the bottom of the page (showing comments on the Sentry landing page) is the image that made me understand what the product is. I think this should be higher up the page. Personally I think step 1 of "how it works" could be much smaller, because step 2 is what I was looking for.
A couple of small grammatical issues:
"How does it works?" should be "How it works" or "How does it work?"
"Share the link and start gathering comment" should be "Share the link and start gathering comments"
"100 new pages by month" should be "100 new pages per month"
One more minor point - I didn't see the "Chrome" download link at first. I assumed "Install" from the line "Install the extension" was going to be a link to install it.
Best wishes for your product journey :-)
Great feedback, thank you!
You are right, I will add the Youtube player.
I understand what the video shows, but the landing page is full of grammar error. For example in the H1
should be instead
I put more feedback in a video on YouTube available here 📺
Really useful video, thank you!
I appreciate you telling me about the grammar errors.
I'm glad, I assumed you're francophone...and I know all my french-speaking friends in real-life always appreciate when I correct their grammar ;)
Haha, yes I am french ;)