Does it make sense from an outside perspective
I am so passionate about this project that my landing page seems more and more like the perfect piece to get my service message across (which I know it is not) - Please take a look and let me know if you understand what I am offering. Suggestions and constructive criticism welcome :) Thanks Team
It's clear, except you don't specify a geographic location, so I assume it's probably not for me.
I did scroll down and see a reference to NZ, so I assume it is only in New Zealand, and thus actually not for me (I am in the USA.)
Said more directly: Say who your audience is, e.g. "Be THAT New Zealand company where people say, 'Man, that sounds like a great place to work.'" Or something like that.
Excellent comment @mikeschinkel. I was considering adding a geo reference and you just added more fuel to that consideration. I think sometimes we think Global so much that we forget to start local and grow from there. Will defo add a focus on service offering for now. Thanks man.
Value proposition is quite clear on the site.
Thank you @nojvek. Its so weird how every time I re-look at the value prop, I reduce it more and more to make it more concise and clear. Soon it will just be an emoji :)
Looks quite clear. Also, an interesting idea.
Hi @florence1434 Thank you for taking the time to share the feedback. I like interesting, it has a touch of exciting and unpredictable :)