Does my copy make sense to you?
Hi everyone,
I have updated my landing page, both the looks and the wording.
I would really appreciate if you could take a look at it and;
- tell me if the copy makes any sense or it's confusing
- what do you make out of it
Here you can find it: https://findremoteevents.com
Thanks!
Yes, between the domain name and copy its clear what it does and the value proposition.
You might add "and more" to the list of events just so people know it is not a limited list of events. I.E. Find yoga, pilates, home gym and stand-up show events AND MORE.
Or, you could add "sampling of events over the past 30 days" (including number of participants might convert people).
I'm not a huge fan of the word "precious" only because I picture Gollum. It's also easily read as precarious (in my screwed up head).
Hope that helps,
thank you so much, this is really nice feedback!
I was also not comfortable with the word precious, but I could not find something nice there. Do you have any suggestions for it?
All I can think of is:
Neither of those are great.
It also occurred to me that this would work really well for seniors, for people with mobility challenges, those with agoraphobia, etc. Your target demographic doesn't need to be limited to WFH or this current COVID-19 virus.
You could also shorten it to "Live events, online". If you want.