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Does my landing page clearly explain what the app is for?

https://neato-app.com/

Made this landing page for a mobile app I published recently. Let me know if you think the page makes it clear what the app is for.
If it's clear, tell me how you might make it better at accomplishing its goal of getting people to download the app!

submitted this linkon June 11, 2022
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    This is so cool! I liked the animation - show, don't tell.

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    I like this stylish design, it is unique and works well with the app's design. But I find the little moving text distracting and I think unnecessary, also, the download buttons should be visible without the need to scroll, usually, the CTA (call to action) is placed in the above-the-fold section.

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      Ah, makes sense. I guess you're on mobile? I'll need to figure out a nice way to show the download buttons without sacrificing too much of the video/text.

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    I think the style really is really suitable for your target audience (couples or roommates who just want a simple way to share chores). It looks simple and personal, not too childish at all.

    Some feedback:

    • The white on green might not be the easiest to read!
    • Love the texts that just float around your screen. Delightful!
    • Would love to see a feature section showcasing “chore history”, “completion notifications”, and “customization”.
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      Thanks for the feedback, I think the idea of showcasing features individually rather than one long video is a great one!

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    The light green/blue has a very low contrast with the text, which makes it very hard to read.

    The "reviews" that flow on the screen are clearly fake reviews, which doesn't add to your credibility. No one gets one-word reviews which are just "amazing".
    If you make them real reviews, that's a different story.

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      Yep I'll definitely need to work on the contrast.
      The "reviews" are supposed to be obviously from myself and a joke, but if you didn't get it then I'm sure some other people won't either