Any pointers for improving the copy and/or articulating the value proposition would be much appreciated. Thanks!
https://batonapp.io
👋🏼 The main headline didn't fully explain the concept to me but your secondary headlines did so that's good.
Baton allows multiple people to remotely control the same presentation. It means never having to say “next slide” ever again.. Maybe there's an opportunity there to optimize that first headline.A visual aid of your product does would help. Right now it's a
big wall of text. Also would recommend putting that call to action next to the headlines where the user is looking, right now it's kind of out floating alone and not in view.Good luck with your project!
Great feedback. Thanks!
That's strange, I added the link but it didn't post. Sorry about that. Here is the link:
https://batonapp.io
Wheres the link to your landing page?