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Does my landing page serve its purpose?

https://imgur.com/a/K9F3arY
submitted this linkon August 12, 2020
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    First off: I don't want to hurt you, but I try to provide you an honest feedback, which might seem rude.

    What I understood from your landing page:

    • You create a platform for learning design (like Skillshare specialized for Design)

    Why should I buy/sign up for that product?

    • I have no idea.
    • I could improve my "user experience", but: Why should I take your platform/your course on UX? At the end: I don't know you. Are you an expert? Are there experts at your platform? Why shouldn't I just search for a YouTube Video with a "real" expert?
    • The only thing that caught my interest was your second screenshot (the one where you are showing the sample course) and I think you should embed that somewhere/somehow in your landing page. It was only the thing that differentiate you from another platform. Could you put something like that onto your landing page as a test?

    I think when you provide a test of a course (e.g. that color theory course) as the second element in that page, you could delete the rest of the landing page. I essentially didn't even read most parts. Imgur Link as an Example

    What did I like?

    • The professional design. Looked trustworthy.
    • The practical course really seemed interesting. I think you should really use that in the landing.

    I hope my feedback helps you and I hope I didn't sound too harsh.

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      Great advice by @eitherway, I agree that there's a lack of "content" on the homepage that demonstrates your value proposition.

      Another thing I would like to add is that you're missing some testimonials!

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        Good notes, I appreciate it!

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      Thanks a lot, I really valued this response. I think I was too focused on making the homepage attractive rather than actually demonstrating the purpose of the site.

      I will revamp it with your feedback in mind. Thank you again!