Does my Landing page show our value?
Hello indie hackers,
We‘ve built a landing page to describe what our upcoming project is all about and to try to get a list of potential beta testers. Small business owners have multiple tasks and workflows. It’s not easy to keep up with financial management as the business increases its scale of operations.
We have created a financial management tool for small business owners to relieve stress and keep finances under control.
Any feedback is welcome and greatly appreciated good and bad. If there are any specific reasons why you wouldn't want to sign up let me and I'll fix it
@Zainabashraf1 - congrats! The landing page is well designed. The only thing I would adjust is cut down some button points.
Agree with some comments here, the "why" and "how" are not so clear. Would be great if you can pitch your visitors what makes your different than other fintech products.
Hi, thanks for your feedback. We are working on simplifying our pitch and making it more understandable.
Yes, it reflects the idea. But "how" is missing i think.
Best wishes
Thanks for pointing it out :)
Hey @Zainabashraf1. The colors are nice, makes you think positively about the difficulties with finance.
In case you’re still looking for more feedback, I’ll be more than happy to give you my detailed thoughts.
Me and my partner will be giving personal real-time feedback in a video chat for this whole week to help other founders.
Check out http://flounders.io/ for the details.
Hope to see you there.
P.S.: Anyone who wants to get feedback is also welcomed 👍
Hi, thank you for the response and for offering personal real-time feedback. I have registered my website.
Nice site. Who is where did you get the cartoon images.
Hello, we connected with an illustrator from https://www.portfoliobox.net/.
It looks pretty clear and design would be great except one thing... ears, they are awful! :)))
Thank you for the response :)
Hi @Zainabashraf1,
I like your idea, the page design is neat with a clean UI.
I just requested an invite on my friend's behalf.
All the best.
Thank you for the response and signing up :)