Does my landing page work?
Hey Indie Hackers,
I'm a developer who wants to get some practice selling content-based products.
I'm running a small experiment over the next couple weeks where I try to sell a 5-week email course teaching developers to be better writers. I'd love to get your feedback on my first pass at a landing page. Here's the link:
https://blissful-noether-4f1d8e.netlify.app/
Thanks in advance :)
I think you have good amount of text and the current landing page is neat and clean. You just need to polish and visualize a bit to help directing visitors.
I think this is a good start Bryan!
I'd recommend moving up the section about "Writing well matters because..." Unbundle the paragraph and make these items into a list or something. They tell me how your course will make me better at my job, so they're important selling points.
The other thing I thought of was road blocks. What might be keeping me from signing up for your course? Figure out a few things which keep people from buying, and then find a way to address those concerns? Ex, Is this expensive? Will it take a ton of time? (You addressed this one).
Great feedback. Thank you.