Does the landing page communicate clearly?

Hi Dan,

Afraid the message isn't clear... You need to think a little more about what the offer is and explain it succinctly - as you're asking people to sign up for something - and yet there's no immediate clear message?

The strapline needs a little more work I think? Maybe test some out on this forum? People will always provide feedback!

The iPhone 10 is the longest one I've seen ;-) You need to get that back into scale - or it does detract a little!

Good luck - don't be disheartened - it just needs a little more clarity and thinking - AND feedback from the IH community I'm sure.

Mark.

Hi,

Here are my observations -

1. The drift pop-up hurt my eyes as the text colour and background is not matching well. Maybe try editing the colour in drift.

2. When I hit explore, the informations slides from right side. I am not sure whether it's a good UX practice. Try bringing that information out of that slider.

3. Also, I could not get a clear value proposition for your tool just that it is some tool to connect with business influencers. If its a landing page, you should have only one goal. Right now your visitors can get distracted by explore, contact us and I'm Business(whats that supposed to mean).

4. Then when I read the content, it says you are building a tool, if its not ready, try something like get beta access across the page and only collect emails, this will help you guage interest in your product before you invest too much time.

5. Also, if its a SaaS, I would be interested in seeing how it looks and how it functions and how is it going to help solve my problems. One needs to connect with influencers for various reasons.

6. When I click on 'I'm Business' it says to sign up again a different goal. No information on if it's going to be a paid product, how many days trial are you offering. If there are some beta-users what are they saying about your product (as social proof).

Hope this helps. :)