What's the best way to figure out what people are complaining about?
Also -- are these the right goals? I'll show the LP first:
The primary goal of the LP is to capture an email address. I think it probably shows that pretty clearly.
What I'm looking to communicate here is that Hallie is a (day planning / automatic scheduling) tool that will result in higher productivity and less burnout. The thesis is that through better scheduling you can focus your limited productivity on the things that matter, and therefore not overwork yourself while still remaining productive.
Maybe it would be better to say that verbatim on the site, but I also felt the need to communicate what the app does and how it works. What do you think of the balance I struck here?