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Does this landing page copy give you a clear idea of what this platform does to support research?

www.coalfacer.com

on December 17, 2019
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    No, but I'm not a researcher. There's a lot of terminology in there and assumed problems eh translation and ethics that (as a non researcher) I have zero insight into. I suggest speaking with researchers themselves.
    Also the images are not legible on mobile.

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      Thank you for the feedback.

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    Not quite. Put up screenshots/ animated gifs / videos illustrating the concept at the top of the page. Also when you open the page from andriod/ mobile, the chatbot comes up too soon and blocks you from reading the text, which is a little annoying.

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      Thanks a lot for this. I'll try to incorporate visuals in the next iteration. Thanks also for the note about mobile responsiveness. I'll figure that out too.

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    All the tools for researchers under one roof?
    It not too clear, sounds like over promising to do tons.. non of it is very focused on we do this thing in an awesome way.

    Some broken design under Android/Chrome..

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      Thanks for this feedback. They're meant to be connected steps in a niche pipeline, but I can see how it reads broadly. I'll have another go at the copy today.

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        If it is a pipeline try to make it visual

        • Can use numbering
        • Can use a graphic that connects them horizontally
        • Can use visual flow with colour or design elements like subtle connecting lines

        Also like the above I'm not a researcher at all, don't know many of the terms, so my reading my be different than your target audience.

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          Thanks a lot for the advice. I'll give it a try

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      Thank you for the feedback. I'm having another go at this today.