Does this landing page make you want to sign up? Looking for ideas for improvement.
Hey IndieHackers, new and happy to be here!
I'm currently building https://pinbin.io
It's a online toolset that aims to help startup founders and product managers validate their product hypotheses quickly and in the process reach product market fit sooner.
So my questions are:
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Overall look?
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Do you have any idea what the product is about?
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Does it compel you to sign up and check it out? (looks professional, intriguing etc.)
Any feedback would be greatly appreciated, as I've designed the page myself. :)
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Hey @Ena, is this pre-launch?
That is correct, we haven't launched yet.
Cool! It loooks really good and completely fits as MVP. Good effort.
Only thing that may be worth doing is putting some timelines as when people may expect as if its sooner then they may feel more inclined to register
The look and feel is great. Right amount of animation, not too much. Copywriting is in the right direction too.
I’d keen to know if this product is designed for startup founders and indie makers?
Thank you very much, I'm very glad you like it. :)
To answer your question we're building this for startup founders and product managers.
Wonderful! What's your next step and how can I be helpful?
Hi Ena,
The overall look is very solid. All elements of landing page design i.e. colors, illustrations, spacing and visual hierarchy have been taken care of.
The benefit of the product is clear from the headline. However the sub-headline does not communicate clearly. It says that PinBin is a set of tools where from the copy it feels like a single tool with different features.
The headline copy of the three design cards is not benefit oriented.
Consider these suggestions:
Focus on what counts => Discover customer problems (needs)
Central source of truth => Communicate with team and stakeholders or ( Bring stakeholders and team together)
Build with clarity => Ship features (products) that customers love
These are quick suggestions. They can be distilled (trimmed) further.
The process section needs a headline as a primer to what's coming next. It will help the visitor better understand the context of the 4 steps.
Integrations section is super clean. It demonstrates the value quickly.
We Walk the Walk section is a bit out of context. In my opinion, it deserves a separate page where the visitors can see the current stage of PinBin and how it plans to move forward leveraging its own platform. I would skip this section.
The CTA section at the end is right at point. I would add a number or a sentence that creates FOMO. For example: Join 50+ product managers who want to achieve product fit faster.
Hope this was helpful.
Open ended question: What tech stack did you use to build your landing page?