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Drop a link and I'll review your landing page

by Isaac Joy

Hey guys,

I'm about to ship https://taken.to and I've been trying to perfect the landing page for a while, in terms of simplicity and being able to quickly understand what the project is about.

With that being said, it's good for me to see some other pages and I will write some feedback to you here if you drop a link to your project.

Isaac

**Update - fell asleep last night + I just launched on Product Hunt today: https://www.producthunt.com/posts/taken-to/ - will be doing them all TODAY so appreciate your patience.

Any posts from Monday PST time I won't be doing - sorry! (18 hours left to post)

*** 2nd Update - the deadline has been reached. Don't post now, I won't do it. Will be finishing them all today, been super busy with the taken.to launch, thanks again!

Isaac Joy's avatarIsaac Joy
on June 27, 2020
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    Just went through a refresh so would love your feedback! https://phonic.ai

    daveferbear's avatar daveferbear
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    :D

    The Carrot App

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      A refreshing UI - I'm not used to this, gives me old school vibes but I like it. Only things that bother me slightly is the container length sometimes changes around the website, so it doesn't flow in one straight line for my eyes - but maybe that's on purpose?

      Super interesting project - albeit I know nothing about dividend investment. How many users/investors do you have currently out of interest?

      Isaac Joy's avatar Isaac Joy
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        Thank you for your feedback. I just started about 1.5 months ago and got 99 investors/users.

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    Hit me with your best shot!

    StockAlarm.io

    yahiabakour's avatar yahiabakour
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      Looks super nice!

      Not much to comment on, it does the job in explaining what the product does in an intuitive way - I would maybe just add some padding below "FREQUENTLY ASKED QUESTIONS" and then also align the footer downloads text with the content underneath.

      Isaac Joy's avatar Isaac Joy
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    Hey Isaac, I'm starting a new community where people can help others with this kind of feedback. Could I share the link with you?

    gdi3d's avatar gdi3d
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      Go for it! Dm me on twitter: https://twitter.com/isaacjoyous

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    https://civility.social - thanks!

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    Hi thanks for doing this, any feedback appreciated: https://bookis.io

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    Would appreciate a quick review of https://dinostar.app
    Thank you.

    vjragavan's avatar vjragavan
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    That's super cool Isaac, thanks for taking the time:
    https://journalisticapp.com

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    Found Taken.to through Hacker News - brilliant work there, just gave you an upvote on Product Hunt as well!

    I recently posted a Show HN asking feedback about my website as well - you should be able to find it in the new Show HN posts - it's titled "Show HN: Database of available one-word domains and domain hacks across 20 TLDs"

    If you can't, here's the website: https://www.oneword.domains/

    Thanks a lot!

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    Heres ours, we recently gave it a revamp and added a blog section. We're now looking at a 'how it works' type of page to add in the future.

    https://serverauth.com

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    https://toppocketmedia.com

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    https://blog.swingpulse.com

    rohovdmytro's avatar rohovdmytro
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    smurly.io
    Thanks!

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    Thanks so much Isaac!

    BuildFaster.co - HTML themes made easy as pie

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    careermove.io

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    https://portabella.io - cheers!

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    https://melbado.com/ - Where early adopters and startups discuss the products of tomorrow.

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    passportlist.co

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    Hi Isaac,

    I'm curious for your feedback on www.recapmail.com.

    Thanks!

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    http://jiga3d.com/

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    https://trendseverywhere.com/

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    https://www.seowl.co

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    priscilladanso.com

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    That's a great initiative! Here's mind, curious what you think. It might not be clear from the get go what it is: midnight.pub

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    I went to check out your Taken page, it looks very promising.
    I feel a little uncomfortable pasting here the landing page here that I'd like to have an opinion on. Here it is: https://www.revenue.land In the meantime, thanks for the offer, Isaac.

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    Be great if your still doing this, very kind of you.

    Mine is https://comps.gg :-)

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    Hey Isaac, thank you for doing this special thing.
    partnersbond.com is our website. I am so excited for your feedbacks :)

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    Mowned.com

    Thanks!

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    https://getaproductjob.com/
    Thanks for helping out!

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    https://www.upstamps.com 🚀 🙏

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    nice one !

    https://www.wickedtemplates.com

    Michael_Andreuzza's avatar Michael_Andreuzza
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    Thank you in advance Isaac ( https://mvpmaker.co/ ).

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    I am just here to say that you are doing a great job. I like the UI of taken.to

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    https://themesberg.com

    zoltanszogyenyi's avatar zoltanszogyenyi
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    Check out some of the projects on Fifty - I'm sure they would love a review.

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    My link: https://www.plummapp.com
    Thanks!

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    Thank you for doing this @isaacjoy :)

    Here's our link: https://hellonext.co

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    Thank you Isaac for doing this,
    https://site2static.com

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    Here’s mine, thanks for your help: https://www.pokerhelper.app

    chris_davies's avatar chris_davies
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    sqlpad.io, many thanks in advance!

    theleonwei's avatar theleonwei
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    You the man!

    https://alcamine.com/

    mwood23's avatar mwood23
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    Thanks in advance,

    Https://PathRoute.io

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    Thanks Isaac for doin this.

    Here is the link: https://www.readrecall.com/

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    Working on https://codewyng.io/

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    Just built https://inferrd.com, thanks!

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      Hey, drive by feedback, I work at a company that has a product which does this. THE MOST IMPORTANT THING for hosting custom models is quick, debuggable, and understandable model testing. Message me and I can chat about it :)

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        Also your environments links don't load, thats probably important too.

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    Here's mine: http://usertrack.net/

    Your app looks really cool, I like how the preview is implemented.

    I was confused by your landing page though, had no idea what your app does. The hero image is just a gradient?

    Also, I have no idea what this means:

    Take everyone to the right place with a beautiful, smart page.

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      Also, a small note, the name: taken.to/name sounds a bit like a redirect service, like bit.ly/name.

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    Lets GOOOO!

    https://storycreatorapp.com

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    https://pikaso.me 🔥

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    https://dogger.io. Thanks a bunch!

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    Thanks for doing this https://ourspark.me/

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    I would love to hear feedback on https://abridge.io.

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    https://wildkard.io

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      Hey hey,

      I like the design aesthetic. A few things I'm unsure about:

      • what multi factors are you doing for authentication?
      • what are "existing services"

      Also just to be complete:

      • maybe have more than one blog
      • the image is a bit scary with eye, maybe something less punchy that also explains to the viewer that you are in security? a lock perhaps?

      But overall really nice and the FAQs answer the questions I needed to know.

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      Looks super nice! I understood it very quickly and looks to be a useful product.

      Some things that could maybe be even better:

      • Less text above the sign up. I think just "Capture email, feedback, feature request and other details on static websites with customizable UI components".
      • Instead of "Supercharge your static website" maybe just "No need to write backend code".

      @harrydry gives good advice on writing like a human in his marketing examples: https://twitter.com/GoodMarketingHQ/status/1258052570263756802?s=20

      But overall, very nice design, aesthetically pleasing and I understand what your product does very quickly. Especially like the animation!

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        For whats it's worth “No need to write backend code” is a nice title I think.

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