Early feedback on landing page - Of Many Minds

@KodingKitty @hijunedkhatri @adam_kershner @behn Thanks a lot for your feedback! All noted and it's given me great material to iterate on this week :)

Very cool...... Nice UI👌

Great idea! Here are some things that you can look into:

1. The CTA button & the text above it are too small. Plus, you can try a white background just on the top portion where the line cuts below the CTA. This will highlight it better.
2. Images are too small & the text in them is not that visible, there's a lot of negative space around so enlarging them will fill it up a bit
3. The text beside the images looks empty. Try dividing the images into separate portions by putting the image & text into a single card. Also, increase the text size ratio of header : body.
4. It's not clear how the product helps in cutting meetings short. It should be the first thing that needs to be visible when you open the website - a clear vision of what you do, how you do it, and who the product is for.
5. I like that the images are minimal & clean if looked at separately.
6. Interesting colour choice! Make sure it doesn't hide the images, like the last one with the blue colour

I think you need to nail down the messaging. It's not clear how or why this solution would be easier or better than meeting about it. In fact, I think there is some value in group discussion that might be lost in making the whole process digital.

It's possible that I'm just not the right prospect for this, but I wonder if there might be a stronger value proposition. Do you have a specific audience in mind for this? And have you spoken to people in that audience to determine what should resonate with them based on their pain points, goals, etc?

It is a good idea!
Compared to the text "Make decisions that get buy-in without wasting hours in meetings." This I would make it easier to understand but most importantly more prominent visually.
Maybe it is not 100% clear what kind of audience you are referring to.

Hello @LuSyo,
just few comments:

• Layout looks OK on mobile, but there is too much space on desktop.
• Heading 1 should be the first and on top. Not at the bottom.
• I'd increase the font size in the hero section.
• As @adam_kershner has already pointed out, I initially had a problem quickly grasping how your page could be useful to the customers.
• CTA at the top is great, put another one at the bottom.

Yours,
KodingKitty

Hey Ludivine,

I wanted to let you know on my first impressions. I do like the minimal feel you are going for in the site but my eyes seem to be going all over the place as I scroll through as there is not much that is bold enough to hold my attention.

It would have been good to make use of a bold headline with a bigger font size for your main tagline "Make decisions that get buy-in without wasting hours in meetings". Perhaps you can even highlight the "Make decisions" text in a different color.

As for each of the sub sections, the title and subtitle could use with an increase in font size. So, on a skim through, it stands out. Also if you make a play with the background colors by alternating them across sections, each part will stand out in itself.

Finally, I believe someone had already mentioned this, but I am not sure what your product is doing. Ideally, if you have some video demo or a little more explanation, it would be great to get the message across.

Hope this helps 🙂

Good idea, but I'd advise making the CTA button a bit more noticeable and consistent with the page's aesthetic (ie not white with red text).
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I wish you luck!

Hey, congrats on your project! I was checking it out, but I gotta say, there's not a lot of info to go on.
There are some prompts and ideas that I left here - https://visualdebug.com/show/ofmanyminds.com

Nice design but I would like to see a bit more descriptions of what is going about.

Just signed up to join your beta, good luck! and look forward to getting access to beta

Hey man! Great website. My only complaint is that it’s not really clear what industry or target audience you have a in mind. Do you have any in mind for this product?

Visually, there seems to be a lot of space between content which makes it hard to see what is going on. I would recommend increasing your font size and the size of your content so it's a bit more attention grabbing.

Hey! great job launching + asking for feedback.

Honestly, I do not understand what the product/service does. And in fact I dont kow what it is...an app? a website? a saas?

A good way to frame it and grab the readers attention is by presenting the problem first, then how you will be able to solve it / what benefits you can bring to the user, and then the features of your solution.

Also, add the call to action again at the bottom, so I dont have to scroll up to the top if I want to get it.

Best of luck!

increase the font size

From desktop perspective:

• I had to scroll to the bottom to see the full UI of what exactly the product did/was- I would move the bottom UI image to the top and update the heading to talk directly to a particular audience as opposed to being generic for all people who have meetings (which is most of us)
• R.e 'Apply to join our beta' call to action - do you have a beta app running? If not, maybe just 'Join Waitlist' would suffice which is shorter and snappier
• If you get round to it, I would try to add a 'Join Waitlist' with just an email capture first, then ask for more info as a second step, I find people drop off when they have to input more info - but that way you can still capture something for those that exit on step 2
• Maybe make the images bigger, hard to see on some of them
• Same with the titles - make some visual hierarchy where the titles stand out from the body content if you choose to add that as @racherdan mentioned

Of course, I'm playing devils advocate here - great progress to test the waters!

Hello. i find them in sum a little too empty. so the texts belong larger to fill the page better. maybe 1-2 sentences more per Topic

It took me a long time to understand what the website does. I think a Landing Page should tell the site visitor what the product is within 5 seconds.

Very cool!!
Who is your buyer? a company? a small team? an individual?

Beautiful colours. I checked this on my mobile. Few things I noticed

• The signup button is a bit small on mobile. AFAIK, for better UX, a button should be 45 - 75 in px. It would be better to do a bit of research.

• It would be better if you could add some textual content and visual elements emphasizing the features. mmm.... I think there is space for improvements in the content hierarchy. This principle called the theory of visual hierarchy, will help organize the content.

• Fonts can be improved too. Maybe you can adjust the font sizes, and balance the whitespace, So that users pay attention to the important content, And that will improve the readability too.

Just few suggestions. I hope this will be helpful :)

Nice idea 👍 would suggest making the CTA button a little more prominent and more in keeping with the theme of the page (ie not white with red text). Best of luck!

Who is your primary reader? What’s their job title?

Hi!
Firstly - Congratulations on taking the leap 🥳

Secondly - here are my 2 cents!

• Headings could have been a little bigger with better typography
• Recommend adding a CTA in each section
• Having a GIF or a Video about the product in the above fold
• Evenly spacing sections
• Have a page-level CTA at the end

Hi! Just checked it out and I was having trouble wrapping my head around the problem you're trying to solve. I think I understand the gist of it, but as the adage goes "a confused mind says no" (or whatever)

It looks like you're focused on group decision-making, given context, which is cool! I run into this a lot with JIRA and my product features prioritizations. I always want to tell my team and customers "these decisions aren't just made by one opinion!!!" As much as you want to prioritize this higher, there are 10 other people that have valid thoughts too! But what everyone agrees on is a sound decision-making PROCESS. So if you were able to build a platform that channels good decision-making frameworks that everyone agrees on, I think everyone would agree on using the platform haha. That way we can spend less time debating and just use the framework

As for UI it's a bit minimal and spaced out (but you already know that)

Just my 2 cents but really hope this helps!

I love the colours! I think some small tweaks to the typography can help the user more easily scan the page and understand the product.

Try making the headings larger and the font weight bolder. Especially for the main hero section at the top of the page.