Hey! Ive spent some evening working on a new service that is using Google API's - I'm usually stuck doing the landing page copy for last so this text was hastily put together so I'm looking for feedback.
Do you understand what the service does?
What is stopping you from signing up at this point?
That's really interesting @fredrik
I'm wondering if I can feature your project on Virtual Mojito ?
Sure!
Hi @fredrick - You did a lot of things well in this site:
-I like the CTA: "What are you waiting for?" It gets users excited.
-The first line makes it easy to understand what the product does -- as does your screenshot below.
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What is the main benefit to the user? I can't tell from reading your site, but I'm guessing it's one of two things:
You can build a website faster and more easily than you could with Splash.that or other website builders designed for events.
You can share an always-up-to-date list of attendees with third parties so that they can plan their portion of the event with the most up-to-date information.
I recommend putting the main benefit as your first line, and moving "Create event websites from Google Sheets" to the subtitle. The user cares first about the main benefit and only secondarily about how it is achieved -- Google Sheets.
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Hey @ryanh1 - thanks for the great feedback!
Where's the link?
🥳 thats a good mistake from my side.
Rosie is right. It’s https://slick.events
I'm guessing it is https://slick.events/