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This is my first time creating a landing page. Hoping to get constructive feedback!

This is my first time creating a landing page. Hoping to get constructive feedback!

https://homeeasy.carrd.co

#landing-page-feedback

on December 15, 2018
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    Hi, here are my comments:

    • I'm viewing this on desktop
    • there is a lot going on when I first hit the page, fading animations, large text, distracting image
    • I find the text quite hard to read (colour contrast between the white and light blue combined with thin text font). Consider making the blue a little darker
    • I personally would remove 'text-align: justify;', makes the text hard to read for me
    • I find text that wide hard to read as well, maybe reduce the column width to ~ 'width: 45rem;' on desktop
    • reduce the size of all fonts slightly, particularly on the titles
    • maybe blur the background slightly using CSS, this will take the focus off it and onto the text more
    • are you targeting Malaysia only? If not, I'd consider changing RM currency to USD
    • "Who should use HomeEasy?" is a good section
    • "bi-yearly" can be a little confusing, from dictionary "appearing or taking place every two years or twice a year.", which is it?

    Let me know if you want any other feedback!

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      Hey Dom I really appreciate the feedbacks!
      I am revamping the landing page a bit but will let you know if you are interested to see the outcome.

      Yes, for now I am only targeting my home country (only the capital city, in fact) because of logistics issue so the currency will be in RM. The bi-yearly for HomeEasy means that the appliances will be changed every two years so perhaps i should use simpler words.