Family travel landing page to scrutinize
Hello fellow indie hackers 👋,
After the pandemic, we decided to travel more with our kids to live more experiences together.
I created https://famxplor.com to help us in finding family vacation activities.
I'm now considering making a business around it to help other busy parents.
I started by improving the landing page copy.
What do you think of it?
Are the target audience and benefits clear?
Is the design important?
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Hello, Denis!
First, I think, it is a great idea!
About the web-site, yes, design is important 😅
For many reasons, which can be our habits - we used to open a web-site and understand just from the first block what is the web-site about. And all products which doesn't look like web-site just unclear doesn't inspire confidence.
Try something like this:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-ak6ksxOvH7Vx_Wr5McJF1VtHJrT9ixM/view?usp=sharing
Feel free to ask any questions :)
Hi, I'm working on an improved landing page thanks to your feedback @elisabetkach
You can see it here: https://famxplor-svelte.vercel.app/
What do you think of it?
It looks great, you did such a good job!!
Would you like also to add to the first screen that it is worldwide? I think, it is a great plus :)
Also, if you ever need help or have questions, here is my email: [email protected]
Glad you liked it and thanks again for your great mockup!
I added 'worldwide' to the first screen as you suggested
Email noted :)
Hi Elizaveta,
Thanks for your explanatory comment!
The design you attached is very helpful and a perfect illustration that design is important
Hi,
Doing my auto critic here to warm up:
What do you see? I'm open to all comments :) Thanks!