Feedback for Landing Page
I have been building Gather | Tasks and Journal with my partner and we would appreciate some feedback on the website landing page.
Overall, the app is a privacy focused bullet journal and task management system on steroids! Any feedback is welcome, thanks!
I like the landing page - simple and to the point.
The screenshots could use some work - I think at some point if you convert them to just one slide with a video showing the in-app experience it would be clearer.
'Take the stress out of keeping track of your life.' - would work better simplified imo. I often use a tool called https://quillbot.com/ to get new versions of my copy.
Hope it helps
Thanks @StephCode, those are some good points. I hadn't considered one slide with a video but that might work really well. Thanks for the recommendation on quillbot.com! I gotta check that out!
Nice to see a LP that’a a little different. 👍
Take this with a grain of salt..
H1 is ok… H2 needs to support the H1 though, I think. And you might want to explain how you address the KVP.
Page is very light ATM. More info needed IMO.
HTH
Thanks @Shaunau! That is helpful feedback
Looks clean, but low on information or anything that convinces me to use it. There's a million and 1 task manager/todo apps like Todoist, TickTick, Microsoft Todo, Google Keep, etc. etc.. How are you different? How are you going to stop me from clicking on site, saying "eh, another todo app" , and closing the tab?
Remember when updating "People buy outcomes, not features". Show anyone hitting your landing page the value they'll get from using this, especially if you can show how it's not just any old todo app.