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Feedback for landing page trying to create a new category

Hey, I launched a new website for Lowdown and would love some feedback. We have our work cut out for us as we believe this product is creating a new category. Therefore a lot of the site is geared around first educating visitors about the problem before talking about our solution.

In particular interested in thoughts on the content and if it succeeds in what we're trying to achieve.

Thanks for any advice!

https://getlowdown.com

on June 1, 2020
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    Video feedback available @ https://youtu.be/0z6Mpg0jmIQ (sorry my voice is a bit rough on this one and breaks up a lot, I don't have a great set up yet :P)

    • Logo & navigation & H1 are great
    • I don't like the feature section, it moves before I get a chance to read it
    • Amazing testimonials, maybe too much text to read and missing STARS? something like a score would be nice
    • Make your CTA more relevant to the section they're in
    • Make your "FIT anything" section less dark and more humane
    • On those "FIT anything" cards, I wasn't sure those badges were clickable until the end when I randomly clicked and it took me to the drill-down feature (WHICH IS REALLY GOOD to do!!)
    • Move the product hunt badge UP with the testimonials, it feels random there
    • Use the Z pattern or 1,2,3 method when you're writing down on HOW to use your product.
    • Maybe add an "ABOUT" page where you explain your mission/objectives with your company! Storytelling is SUPER powerful to get people to like you before they signup for a demo/freetrial

    All in all the content is great, it could be slightly presented better (cut down some text, remove some animations, display it in a more readable manner so it flows naturally)

    Keep it up! I might actually use it with my team once the covid-spending-block is revoked!

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      Wow that's amazing. Just watched the video, thanks for taking the time. Lots of things highlighted I can tweak. Much appreciated!

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        You're welcome - out of curiosity did you consider or have subscribed to the channel? If yes why? If not why?

        I am just asking because I wonder if I should explicitely ask people to subscribe during the video? don't bother if you did not subscribe, don't just go and do it now! I am not planning on becoming a youtuber :P but it also shows that my channel needs more work to become an instant-subscribe magnet

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          I didn't subscribe no. I suppose I'm not that interested in watching videos of other peoples sites being reviewed. I'd be more likely to watch/subscribe to something that was providing more general landing page advice. Like "here are 10 ways to get social proof for your landing page" type videos. Hope that helps!

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            That helps! Thank you!