Feedback for my Landing page. Tell me if you clearly understand what I have built. Definitely tell me if you don't

Quick clarity pass after reading your page:

1. Put this as the hero line: “Private URL shortener for internal team links (not public link sharing).”
2. Add a before/after strip right under hero:
   • Before: links scattered in Slack/docs
   • After: one private shortlink hub your team controls
3. Keep one CTA above fold (“Create private shortlink”) and move secondary actions lower.

If useful, I can do a tighter 5-minute copy/layout teardown here:
https://roastmysite.io/go.php?src=external_manual_nonhn_indiehackers_clearvalue_20260328_c1_usd_presell_hv

I love what you've done, but right now the landing page assumes I know what value it brings instead of showing me how it will improve my teams productivity.

Tell the story: this is your life now (links everywhere you forget)...this is your life with u/Short...all your links organized in one place.

Private URL Shortener…

…is enough. I think simplicity is key for your product. The people who want it, will know what it is.

If I were you, would make a tiny lottie file / gif demo and show the product under the headline “Private URL Shortener.” And below the fold I would just list all the features that sell yours specifically.

The name and logo create confusion because they sets up the expectation that it’s a public url shortener.

I get the page, it's a private url shortener, takes a second vs the common public url shorteners for sharing links, could somehow clean the top with a bit more spacing and maybe mark them as step 1 and step 2 as you'd need both, but I assume you'd also reference the other from each. Maybe it's smarter just to start with one on the LP, but I'm not exactly sure how I would go about it