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Feedback for new landing page?

Just launched a new micro-saas landing page for smsdripp.com, a niche product for Square and Twilio. I wanted to hear your feedback, mostly about the design, UI and content. I am not a designer so any feedback could be helpful.

https://smsdripp.com

Thank you!

on November 12, 2020
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    Hi Ganoro,

    I'm new so I thought I would help a bit.

    The landing page looks good - love the sliding copy above the call to action.

    "The most effective marketing strategy for your..." (maybe)

    A couple small things from a design perspective -

    • Have a think on your main visual next to the call to action. It should reflect what your company does instead using of a generic picture. These are generally good spots for illustrations.

    • I would increase the font and bold your quotes. Give them hierarchy above the descriptions. You could also lose the bounding box around them.

    • Some of your descriptions have periods and others don't.

    • watch out for sentences that end with just one word at them bottom it can look
      clunky

    • "already a user" works but most companies still have the "log in" "create account" options on top right.

    • "choose your template" is adjusted right I would bring it center or left to align with the call to action.

    • consider using one of your template images instead of the generic photos. Adding choose your template next to a photo of a template would help as well.

    --Hope it helps and good luck!

    Best,
    Julian

    https://julianthecreative.com/

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      Hi Julian! Wow your feedback is super helpful and excited to see how it improves the conversion. I loved your illustrations at julianthecreative.com!

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        Thanks :) and good luck!