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Feedback for new landing page

Hey,

I'm looking for someone to give quick feedback to my landing page. I have previously received quite critical feedback on my landing pages, hope to see the same intensity in the response this time as well. You guys are the first ones I'm showing this landing page, go for it IH community:

https://www.concordapp.in/

This is what I'm looking to get feedback for exactly:

  • Clarity of the hero text
  • What feels redundant?
  • What feels relatable?
  • Is there any question that comes to your mind that I didn't answer?
  • Will you sign up?
on February 5, 2021
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    Hey @tshr, this looks good so far. My evaluation depends a lot on a few contextual questions.

    1. Who is your target audience? Primarily India-based consumers?
    2. What would I get if I signed up, and for what price?
    3. Is it easy to swap in/swap out what I read? And are there tiers (ie, 3 outlets for one price, 10 for another)?

    One note, I think there's a misspelling of the word "bureau" in the first headline on the "Why support journalism" page

    Andy

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      Also, just having tested the CTA, the navbar CTA doesn't do anything and I was able to move on to a questionnaire from the in-page CTA without entering an e-mail address.

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    Hi @tshr,

    Here's my 2 cents,

    1. Journalism outlet as a term is something not very obvious to me.
    2. Was not clear with this one "Don't want to support all the journalism outlets?" - What context does support bring in here?
    3. The term journalism outlet feels a bit redundant.
    4. Questions that come to my mind are, What will I actually get, I can see that I get to select few newspapers, but beyond that what happens is something that I'm unclear of.
      Another question I get is How does Concord help or support journalism, that part is not too clear to me. Also, the options I will have when it comes to selecting news sites/magazines is something that I'd want to know upfront without which I may not want to sign up for.
    5. Relatable is the ad free part, because ads popping up in news sites is a lot and supper frustrating.

    Hope this helps! Good luck!