Feedback for new Landing Page Design

Hello guys, I've recently decided to trash my old landing page and create a new, modern, one.

I've started with a tailwind template and customized it for my need.

I will not say what the project is about, because the landing page should be self-explaining, otherwise it will fail its purpose.

Let me know if it's easy to understand what this is about.
Any feedback will be appreciated!

Here is the link: https://getsentinel.io

Cheers

Tommaso Carpi

on September 3, 2022

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Minimalism, that's what I love :D

Kornelius

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  Thanks!
  
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After a scroll I figured out what your product is about. But Google Authenticator works well for me so I couldn't see a reason why I would buy another 2FA product from you. Also I think your product's name is too generic and bad for SEO.

boyanpro

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  Hello, thanks for the feedback.
  Regarding the why I can say: Google Auth does not offer backups (you gotta do it manually), lacks of features (eg folders) and does not offer macOS nor watchOS app.
  
  Regarding name: I take the point. I would like to build a brand with other product around the name Sentinel, that’s the reason. But I understand your point.
  
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Quick thoughts:
- Using a quote as your tagline fills a bit odd, I like the quote but that could maybe become a sub-header or replace the app image on the RHS
- You could put the download links right their above the fold rather than use a Download button that moves you down to them
- Beyond Dark Mode doesn't feel like a benefit, you could rework that to focus on the benefit or replace with something stronger
The rest is nice, feels like a strong landing page.
jmacgregor

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👀 I don't understand the meaning of "Accounts" in the pricing.

👀 I also spotted a couple of english typos in the grammar in the FAQ

✅ Other than that I think the site is great

orliesaurus

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  Hi! Would "token" be more understandable?
  I'll check the FAQ's! thanks
  
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    I still don't understand what token means in the context, do you mean 2FA codes?
    so like
    Github 2FA codes = 1 token
    Github + Gmail 2FA... = 2 token
    Github + Gmail + Cloudflare 2FA... = 3 token
    etc
    
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      Yes correct! 2FA codes is actually not bad, thanks for the suggestion
      
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Hello Tomasso, I was checking your landing page, it looks good, simple and direct on the features, good luck with your project.

amjadshaaban

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  Thank you!
  
  Tommaso Carpi
  
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