Feedback for our OnePage Waitlist? 🙏
Hello guys,
You all know how critical is that 1st. impression for a website.
And even more when is for capturing mails for your waitlist.
So we just did this! Our truly 1st version 🤓
But, before getting excited and publishing "everywhere":
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I will love to know what do you understand from this copy?
If I don't give you any more details, what will you say Sideby is? -
Here the link > sideby.io
( its extremely simple - for now - as we wanted to be as lean as possible for this 1st version)
Any thoughts? We highly appreciated your feedback
Thanks in advance for your time reading me 💙
The page has a lot of grammatical/spelling mistakes. Looks like English is not your native language. I would get someone on upwork who speaks English natively to comb it over. for example
Sit virtually side-by-side your user (this is technically right but doesn't read well)
See who is in your site & cobrowse immediately with zero setup (should be "who is on your site". Co-browse needs a dash)
Want to give a remarkable customer support? (should be "Want to give remarkable customer support?")
These are just a couple. I would get someone to help
Thanks for your precious time answering with such a detail.
Very appreciated, yes, I will make sure a native takes a look asap!
Just made those few changes, tks tks :)
It may work better if you switch the "Discover who's in your..." with "Sit virtually side-by-side...". I think you want to keep your heading short, suggestive and memorable.
I will do that, I feel it could actually work! :)
I will post the changed version soon, let's keep in touch.
Tks for your time Artur!
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Looks nice! I would try to shorten that heading. Try to fit it on one line for desktop computers.
Thank you! Yes, We wanted to make sure is so clear, but true, I will switch and make it shorter to see how it looks :)
Post it back soon, keep in touch!