Feedback for pre-launch landing page https://www.mavenx.io
Hello fellow IndieHackers,
I'll really appreciate if you can give some feedback on pre-launch landing page of my startup MavenX.
We believe that there is ample room for creating a differentiated product in collaborative software space. We will soon open our beta testing phase - as of now, landing page has minimal content.
Hey landing page looks pretty good! In the future or if you still are looking for some designer quality feedback on your designs I'd love to help you out! I recently started a design feedback website called Pastryy, we can provide designer quality feedback on your logos, websites and mobile app designs.
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Thanks @AJPicard913 for the feedback. I am a non-designer, and current design has been done by me. Hence, it may be clumsy at places. I'll surely get in touch once we start engaging with professional designers.
Sounds good happy to be that professional designer as well lol here's my studio's website if you were looking for one: www.SauceDesigns.io
There're no features listed on the page..features of what ur software does to help.
I would be hesitant to leave my email because I don't know what exactly I am signing up for.
Thanks for the feedback. I've added use cases and features - have a look and see if this can convince you to put your email :)
Clean and clear.
There seems to be a huge amount of whitespace above your headline, would you consider moving everything up a bit so that more of the graphic would be above the fold? But maybe this is a design feature, on my laptop your headline is bang centre of my screen.
Thanks for the feedback. I intend to introduce the Menu bar shortly - once that happens, white space won't look bad.
Hi,
I think you can probably use a darker font color for
"Intuitive & feature-rich - Collaboration Software for teams"
The logo in footer does not need to have a white background, you could use a white, smaller version of the logo. Your graphics seems to have a white background while your page has a grey one.
Regards,
Mody
Thanks a ton, Mody. Your feedback is much appreciated.
I've fixed first two points. I'll use transparent logo in footer as soon as I have it.
Cheers