I would love your eyes on my landing page. I've tweaked a bit in the past 2 weeks as I've completely pivoted from local to virtual coffee and lunch breaks for folks who are working from home.
Biggest questions are:
Here's my page https://meetcafecito.com
I like your landing page as it is simple and allows the product to speak for itself. It's good that you have regular CTAs directing users to the sign-up form. I think you may benefit from adding testimonials from users of the product as I imagine there are lots of great experiences!
I was curious to know which countries you operate in, I know this is ever-changing depending on the latest users but something like a map of users could be quite interesting for viewers who are considering to sign up. Another option is to include a short FAQ section where you can cover popular locations, key topics covered, whether companies can sign up etc. - you could also include an update on COVID-19 here but I can see you've done that earlier in the page which I think is a better idea in the current times.
When I initially saw the form, I felt it was quick lengthy however I understood the importance of each question after completing the form myself. I took slightly longer than 2 mins to complete the form though, as I took some time in considering my responses for the last few questions.
I'm planning to build a landing page tool so it'd be great to know which tool you used for your site and what was important to you in this process. Please let me know if you're willing to share, thanks :)
Thank you for taking time to leave feedback!
For this landing page I used carrd.co hooked up with airtable (form and database) and zapier (confirmation emails). Let me know if I can help!
No problem at all, and thank you for sharing the information on the landing page tools.
I dig it! Love the value prop, especially in these challenging times. Some quick copy feedback:
This sentence feels a bit awkward. I'd recommend to pick either "one lunch" or "one connection." - also, spell out "one" instead of 1. So it'll be "Solving the isolation problem one connection at a time."
This is a feature, not a benefit - the word opportunities feels a bit awkward here. My first thought would be remote job or project, opportunity, but then I realized you're talking about the "opportunity to connect." - Would recommend saying something like "Meet new people" etc.
This is good! As a user I'd love to unplug.
Again, this doesn't feel like a benefit for me. It feels like I need to soak up the convo. The subtext is good tho! Consider using it (Meet a number of like-minded people for a chat and build your network) <-- quite direct and to the point.
After reading the page, I'm still not sure on how I'd connect with new people. Is it via cam? Tinder-like match? Giving some insights into this on the copy will give more clarity.
Overall, it's quite easy to navigate, the "what" is quite clear, but can be more detailed. Consider explaining the "how."
Jovian! Thank you so much for this. Really actionable items I can improve on and definitely need to make these changes you've mentioned.
You're completely right on the awkward sentence, they felt a bit weird to me too but didn't know what to change them too. So, I'll be re-thinking.
And your comment around the 'how' is accurate as well. I need to update the page to include that as well.
Do you have any examples or other landing pages that communicate the how really clearly?
You're very welcome! I always love Basecamp's copy, especially this page: https://basecamp.com/how-it-works
You can see that everything revolves around the copywriting. If you take ou the images, it still works! Check out Drift (drift.com.) - They also have excellent copywriting.
Hey @_justirma wonderful execution!!!
Is the value prop clear?
Yes, the tagline and description are very clean and easy language
Easy to navigate?
Too early to tell because not sure if you've other features, need to check again in the future
What do you find doesn't work in terms of UX or in general?
Checked mobile site, might need to adjust left and right padding
Great work!
I'm also working on my site, would love to hear your advice!
Thank you, Felix! I'll improve the experience on mobile :)
I love your site! It's super clean and not too noisy. The 'What's Inside' section is great, provides a bit more detail to what I'd receive after sign up. I'd love the ability to see a sample template that I can't copy before I enter my email! Overall, awesome work.
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Thank you so much! I appreciate the feedback.
And yes that's a good point, I need to list the experiences! And even get real pictures. It's definitely on my to-do list. Thank you again for taking the time to provide your thoughts.
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