Me and my friend built this prototype for an AR-app that lets you customize your car from your phone in real-time. Right now, it lets you try on new wheels to your car. Would really appreciate any feedback, and also if the concept is easy to understand: https://www.modmyrideapp.com/
Hey @kukac 👋 cool idea!
@HenriNext is right though - landing page would benefit from some polish. That said, I could see this working regardless of the landing page TBH. 👍
Best of luck!
The landing page made sense to me. I like the example. I'm on Android, but if I was on iOS I would have tried it. Looks good!
Great idea, but room for improvement in landing page:
.. On Firefox there is technical problem behind the video - it shows scrollbars..
.. Black brown background color on hero.. If this is about pimping up car brown is probably the worst color you can choose, maybe 10% opacity faded image of shining chrome and beautiful people as background would be better
.. Too many different fonts
.. Readability of font used in subhead ("customizing your car...") is not great, and the subhead text/copy is too long
.. "Fancy trying it" is a signup form, but in hero you had what looked direct app download button, confusing..
.. !!! How it works fails to show your most important unique selling point, which IMO is that you can quickly try tons on different rims.
.. How it works point 3 ("take your new rim home") is sub-optimal, it implies customer needs to go to shop, while actually you deliver, i think? So you should say something like "get your new rim delivered to your home fast/effortlessly"
.. Benefits point 1 ("get a new rim on your car under 5 seconds") is incorrect... you only get the rim after day or two, right?
.. Benefits point 3 ("share with your friends") is not benefit, it's a feature. the benefit of that feature is something like "get opinion from your friends"
.. How it works and benefits main descriptions font readability is bad
Hope this helps & best of luck!