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Feedback on a landing page w/ a game at the end

Hey folks,

A friend of mine and I are trying something new with landing pages. Instead of simply describing the value prop, we've added a small game for every one that signs up. The goal of the game is to be fun, comical, and informative :).

I'd love to know what folks think: https://teaspoonterms.com/.

on August 21, 2020
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    • The colour contrasts are really low...
    • It's confusing if this is for a user or a publisher in the initial section
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    I didn’t see a game. Perhaps because I’m on mobile?

    I do really like the “don’t be like...” section.

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      Thanks man! The game is at the end of sign up. Maybe we should do the game first?

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        It’s pretty interesting, and could be used to keep the customer’s interest but I don’t know that it accomplishes much after the signup.

        I’m definitely a skimmer, so when I got to the terms page I sort of lost focus. Could you make it less text heavy and more to the point?

        Also the console window was cut off on the right side on my iPhone 7.

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          As in, the game should skip the intro and get to the terminal faster?