Feedback on first ever newsletter?
Here's a link to my newsletter, The Cyber Gym Rat: https://kobibell.substack.com/p/coming-soon
I'm looking for feedback on my first written newsletter and they are a couple of things I'm asking for.
- How is the copywriting and grammar?
- As this is my first one, I want to make sure that the copywriting is looking good.
- How is the format / structure?
- Can it be broken up better? (e.g. adding different headers sizes, separating by subject, and make it clear what's being talked about at all times?)
- Should I add more images or call to action?
Does it look too dull on the eye?
Thanks for all who takes their time to give feedback!
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I read the newsletter and I liked it! I think that's it's good written and for example in
"The Backstory on how ‘The Cyber Gym Rat’ came to be" I think there were enough images and there aren't any more Images needed. The idea with those "chapters" for example "This is our story:" is also good, because the reader knows what he/she is reading at the time and it makes the text more structured.
Thank you for your feedback!
I wanted to craft the newsletter in a way that felt like a story, and I'm thrilled that someone was able to see it in that light.
I personally prefer shorter newsletters. I find it easier to read long form content when I have dedicated time and not trying to clear out my inbox. Overall, great work though!
Thank you for your valuable feedback!
In future editions, I will take the reader's perspective into account and aim to make longer content more concise for their benefit. :-)
I'm glad to hear that you found it well-written and engaging, with a good structure and appropriate use of images. It's great to know that you appreciate the effort put into creating the newsletter.
I read the newsletter and I think that's it's nicely written with good structured story-telling and an appropriate images through-out. Some people will prefer shorter news-letters so you may want to think about a short form version for more frequency and a long form for monthly letters. Overall, looking good though!
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