Feedback on landing page
Hey fellow indiehackers,
I am sure we have all experienced a lot of frustrations when searching for a new job and find it a daunting experience. Here with our new project TAP we are trying to solve as many issues as possible.
We have created a landing page, but would really appreciate some feedback on thoughts; whether you understand what we are offering and any SEO suggestions we could work on?
Any comments welcomed.
Many Thanks
Shannel
I don't see the value add. Your content is too vague.
e.g. 'Tap takes care of everything so you do not have to worry about anything'. I have no idea what this means. What am I worrying about that you are solving?
Hey - thanks for your feedback- definitely agree with what your saying. We are trying to work on the content and explain the USP’s where we can- hopefully our video content will help this.
I like the design however I miss some more information on the content. It's quite vague and with maybe some preview of the e-book would be great.
Great appreciate the feedback - we have been struggling a little with the content and our SEO strategy... but will review it further. Thank you :)
I think the overall design is really clean and simple - Great work, I like it :) The green, white and black together makes it feel a bit playful yet easy to read the text and navigate the site.
As a video nerd I would love to see some kind of video content to give the page some more life, but I imagine that once your site is live you can do some tutorials etc to show potential users how it works instead of having screenshot images (I would perhaps maybe put a boarder around those images to make it obvious that it's a showcase?).
On a slightly different note I've been developing a concept of video ads for recruitment firms. If you have any ideas or insights on this I would love to hear your thoughts.
Awww great thank you for your feedback!! Yes we think we are lacking the interactive/ product demo-videos - so will take this away and work further on this. :)
What we want to try and do is create a portfolio of videos which states the problem and how TAP solves it type thing.
We can discuss further if you want? I’m new to this so I assume you can do private chats?
I think that sounds like a great idea. Users tend to have it a lot easier to imagine the full functionality of the product when they can see a video demo :)
Sounds great. You can't do private chats but how about connecting on Linkedin? :) My profile is here: https://www.linkedin.com/in/emelieklasson/