Feedback on Landing Page

I agree with everyone here. There are way too many words. I like the branding and typography choices.

I do get your point about SEO, but imagine if they land on your website and are instantly turned off by the wall of text.

you are 101% developer, just meat ;) it looks like a blog post, even for the blog post is too simple

Very clean and crisp! I love the orange and black colour combination!

I agree with everyone here, I didn't end up reading the whole thing. Maybe you can reduce the words to some graphical pointers and have one or two 'Know more' pages?

Way too many words, needs more imagery. People don't read, nobody reads. I'm surprised you're reading this. Show, don't tell.

I love the branding!

Sprinkle some images in between the text so people keep enjoying reading( not everyone likes reading, some like seeing icons and images)

Hope that helps

Good luck

Updated page, in case anyone wants to chime in: https://www.freeshifter.com/dedicated/

Thanks for all the feedback, everyone! Sounds like more images and fewer words is the answer, here :)

I too struggle with what I'm going to point out. There are too many words. I've done the same thing over and over and every marketing person hates it. They tell me to use as few words as possible to get people's attention, but not overwhelm them. Since yours looked like my early attempts, I wanted to pass along that advice I've picked up.