Feedback on Landing page.

The point about proof is important.

No social proof is usually better than weak or unverified social proof. For an early product, I think clarity and one believable use case probably build more trust than trying to look bigger than you are.

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What's working: Clear product category, competitive pricing ($5.99/mo), and the analytics pitch is solid.

What needs fixing:

1. "Join 10,000+ users" needs proof. No logos, no links, nothing backing it up. If it's real, show evidence. If not, drop it — fake social proof kills trust faster than no social proof.

2. The testimonials read as AI-generated. "Sarah Miller, GrowEasy Solutions" — no photos, no links, no way to verify. Either make them real or remove them entirely.

3. Hero section is confused. "Your short link is ready" appears before I've done anything. Pick one primary hook and commit.

4. No live demo. Let me shorten a URL right on the homepage without signing up.

5. Before/After section is broken — renders nothing. Fix or remove.

6. Pricing is buried. Your price is competitive — lead with it.

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I only see the one version both on the site and the image. That's probably because you started this thread a while back.

In any case, looking at what you have I think you may be leading with the wrong message. In looking at the entire page, it seems like the main benefit isn't so much that the links would be memorable, but that this would help with organization and productivity. That also seems like it would be a differentiator from something like bitly, which promotes a different use case.

If you are targeting people looking for these benefits, I would change the heading group to something that speaks more to that. If that is not the main use case you have in mind, then I would rethink the rest of the page.

Best of luck.

I honestly prefer the original version.
The one live right now is a bit distracting with the "typing hands". Also does not play nice with the readability of the content shown on top.

Check the vertical alignment on "Add to Chrome" button. It's noticeable misaligned and doesn't contribute to the clean/professional look.

Just opened it on my phone and noticed it had responsiveness issues (white section to the right). In terms of the content, the value proposition could be a bit clearer - took me a while to understand what it does after watching the video. Otherwise, looks like a cool project!