Feedback on landing page for a browser that keeps people focused.
https://focusbrowser.launchaco.com/
Is my copy and value proposition clear? What could I improve?
I'm trying to target 'Internet Addiction' + 'Site block' as keywords. I'm planning on driving some traffic with Adwords. If you have any recommendations for doing this please let me know!
Can you describe your target audience in details at this point? If not, you might want to rethink about that. That could resolve a lot of unanswered questions regarding your page and how appealing it is, and also in terms of conversions, and not traffic solely. Try optimization running multiple A/B testings (twik.io could help you with that) to see how you can make the page perfected
The copy and value proposition is explained very well.
The landing page could be better, it's pretty plain, but it gets the job done. I recommend you improve this image https://cdn.launchaco.com/images/2e233d4b-f8a6-494f-b1cb-e6629dbad450.png on the laptop screen.
I would advise against paying Adwords to drive traffic. Use sites like IndieHackers, Reddit, etc to drive traffic and get users.
Have you had good success with Reddit? I think my target audience is probably not the IndieHackers crowd. With Reddit my concern is that there's no intent there. What are you thinking is the problem with using Adwords?
No, I have not, but that's not to say you won't have good success with Reddit.
There's no problem with Adwords, it's just I feel as though you should keep spending at a minimum while validating the idea, and using sites like IndieHackers and Reddit can enable you to do that.
True. I've tried Reddit on a few projects. My results have been hit and miss... I often get a lot of upvotes and a couple of people sign up but that's it... it's a lot of effort for a little payback. Maybe I haven't figured out the trick yet.
Re using Adwords: I'm with you that using Adwords is expensive... I'd need a business with really high margins to actually use it as an acquisition channel... but it's pretty useful for testing. You can spend a few dollars and quickly see how your site would preform if you put time into ranking in organic results.
Anyway, thanks for your thoughts + hope I can return the favor some time.