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Feedback on landing page for my new simple game!

I would love some feedback on my landing page for my new game I just launched on the app store: https://www.logogame.app/

Is the messaging clear? Do you feel compelled to download and give it a try?

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    Personally didn't find it too compelling. At quick 5-sec scan, it just didn't sound that fun to me. Felt like a weird version of quiz, rather than a fun game.

    What if there was a mechanic where you only see like, 5% of the logo at first and have to guess? You see more and more as time goes on, but get fewer points. Animations would help on the landing page too. Also, I didn't understand why I needed to download an app to play this. Feels like a web game to me.

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      Hope this isn't too harsh - landing page looked clean though and liked the colors. Keep going!

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        not harsh at all! love the feedback joel. i think you had some great suggestions (specifically on the timer). Adding an animation on the landing page is an excellent idea as well.

        one reason i wanted to make this a mobile game was for offline access on the go!

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    I really like there is no a lot of screenshots or samples of the game, so the landing page makes you very curious about it. If I had I phone I would install it :-)

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    Hey there! I actually ended up downloading the app! :)

    Great content. And really nice idea.

    I liked the images you created for AppStore, but the design on the landing page could definitely use an upgrade. The color and the font selected makes it too "rigid" and not fun enough, if that makes sense.

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      awesome thanks for the feedback @swaathi!

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    Only having an iOS app could be problematic for the European market. As far as I know the market share for mobile devices in Europe is quite in favor for Android OS.

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      good to know! the android app should be coming out soon!

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      hey tonixx, feel free to send me an email at [email protected]

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