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Feedback on Lifestamp landing page

A place to document your life. Is it clear what the goal of the app is and usefullness?
www.lifestamp.app

on November 23, 2019
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    One suggestion is to add a favicon to the site.

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    I’d recommend swapping your logo to a .svg file. It will make it look a lot better (and more credible) without the pixel dither.
    Good work

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    Just a note that you bounce between "we" and "our" and "you". I'd stick to the 2nd person. talk about "you" "you're" "your"... and then only in the call to action button, like you do, "sign me up". but it can be a stronger like: "Save My Memories"

    It's only text, and maybe someone else might suggest graphics or photos. I suggest a video. Even if it's just you discussing the idea, and repeating what's written... it's fine. Just need something to break up the text and give people a different angle.

    Your Landing page could also share with me the frustration with existing solutions. What do you know I've tried and failed. Private Instagram Accounts can't do {{ X }}. Google Docs can't do {{ X }}.

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      thanks for the feedback! ill be iterating and will add a photo or video.