Feedback on LP Copy
Hey guys! Could you give me feedback on my LP copy ??
We have several value propositions but we are struggling to transmit them
(I'm not looking for signups or anything just want honest feedback on how we can improve our message)
THese are other Headers and SH that we have been toying around:
H: Work on mobile without switching apps: Schedule, add to-dos, & share info.
SH: Access OneKey keyboard app in 1-click, from any app you work with (chat, email, social...).
H: Schedule meetings on mobile in 1-click, without switching apps or messaging back-&-forth.
SH: Use OneKey keyboard app to share your availability in any app (chat, email, social...).
