Feedback on my 1st landing page
Hi fellow makers!
This is my first making-in-public side project, and I don't think copywriting or creativity is my strong suit. Would you be able to review and share your feedback?
https://quickchatbot.versoly.page
Thanks 😊
I'd have to agree with everyone else. Other than a few changes I think the overall landing page looks good.
I'm no professional copywriter, so take my copy with a grain of salt!
The main heading I would change to, "Save X-Hours Per Week With Automated Chat Scheduling". Not sure if I used the correct words that your customers use but I'd recommend using numbers if nothing else.
The next heading with smart business I would change to, "A Customer Service Bot Available 24/7 For Your Customers".
The last change I would recommend would be changing the top image to something more descriptive. Ideally showing your app in a screenshot of some sort would look better in my opinion.
Thanks @Risk. All the copy changes do make sense. Check - will do.
I like the landing page a lot. Maybe instead of a question at the top make it a statement?
Agreed with this.
Everyone's business should be smart. Is yours?
Empower your biz to generate leads in your sleep.
The chat animation at the bottom also needs to be a bit bigger / faster.
overall good start!
Thanks @codingcoop. Good idea, will make a change in copy. Also making demo to run faster.
Much thanks for your feedback 🙌🏼
Thanks @cyberbadger for the valuable feedback, glad you liked it. I will make a change in copy.