Feedback on my first blog post on my new startup
Statuspal: Hosted Status Pages & Monitoring – Statuspal – Medium
Hi dear indie hackers,
I'd love it if you could check out and give me some feedback on my introductory blog post for my startup https://statuspal.io.
I have very little experience blogging and much less blogging for a business, do you think it gives clear message?, any feedback appreciated.
Thanks a lot!
Neither of your first two paragraphs make it a solid value proposition to the reader. You need to tell your reader what value they will get out of both the post and the blog itself.
Saying the the problem you solve is "status communication & monitoring" doesn't work. That's not a problem, that's a field of products. You need to communicate what actual value your product delivers to someone who maybe hasn't even realized that status communication is of value to their business.
Hope this helps!
Thanks a lot @supergoodjared! I had the feeling I was doing that, but still this is the way the article came out naturally, I'll refine it.