Feedback on My Landing Page
I'm building a productized service to help e-commerce brands scale up product photography using synthetic media (basically CGI). Currently we're focusing on home goods brands only - furniture and home decor.
Here is my landing page.
https://dabble.so
Please be ruthless and roast it. Let me know if it seems clear what we're offering and why an e-commerce brand should buy from us. I'm going to be working on marketing over the next few weeks and I think my landing page needs a do over but I wanted to get your thoughts. Thanks!
In terms of design and layout, I think it's great, and in terms of copy I don't have any opinion because it's not my strong point, but I wanted to comment on the post because I think it's a very interesting idea! I wish you lots of success with your project.
thanks !!
The headline doesn't give me a concrete result. It tells me what I can do, but I don't know why that matters. Try to connect those dots somehow.
"Increase customer conversion by 14%"
"Customers prefer CGI displayed products 2 to 1"
It's unclear to me who the target market it is for this, but I think you can address that by making the headline a bit more specific.
makes sense. The target market is furniture store owners on Shopify & Etsy, but I realize that the headline should be something more tangible. My issue has been trying to balance reducing text and explaining the value prop clearly, but i'll work on that
–Simplify the tagline to either "Showcase your products in limitless environments" or "Showcase your products with hyper-realistic CGI." I had to read it through several times.
– Try to adjust format so first image isn't cut off at fold. Many ways to do this. Would have greater impact with this small adjustment.
Oh yea, I suppose I don't even need the headline + tagline. Could just use tagline as the headline. And that way the image might be pushed up a bit?
Maybe worth a shot just to see how it looks. Overall looks good and I like the idea. Keep pushing forward.