Feedback on my landing page for an upcoming game.

Nice work, I like you game apps. When I looked at your landing page it wasn't clear to me that it was only an app game. I thought it was desktop game as well. I agree the text is a bit light in color. I found your work button confusing on the bottom of the landing page. I also thought you can use the illustrations you've already created as background elements - I took screenshots of your artwork so I know that some of the background elements are a bit blurry and pixelated.

I quickly redesigned your landing page focusing on a couple of points making the text a bit easier to read, making sure visitors understand its an app game, adding illustrations to the background, if people click on the Crevasse logo at the top of the landing page that should link to your other work and added a clear footer with your social links.

Here is the link to the redesigned landing page - https://imgur.com/5EpVu5Z

Let me know your thoughts.

I agree with the text being a bit too light. I also like that you have a "My work" button to show off your other games.

I like the artwork. Are these the screenshots of the app? or just webpage eyecandy? I'm not so sure.
Maybe the text is just a tad bit too light?
First impression: It looks nice. Maybe have the app name displayed on page (on its own, like a logo or in the header)?