Feedback on my landing page?
First ever landing page, created with carrd.
Do you get what the service is? Any key questions that pop up from reading the page?
All feedback (positive and critical) welcome!
Thanks in advance
First ever landing page, created with carrd.
Do you get what the service is? Any key questions that pop up from reading the page?
All feedback (positive and critical) welcome!
Thanks in advance
Thank you all for the valuable feedback! I'll have a go at reworking it over the coming days
I think the app concept itself is a good idea, makes perfect sense.
I would rewrite the homepage copy to be honest. It gets the point across fine, but it comes across too startup founder-y - don’t use words like innovative. Quick and secure are not selling points in this day and age.
Have screenshots (or mockups if you’re not there yet) of the actual features, and just statements describing the important benefits and features (eg integration into x payment providers).
Sound advice, I should be able to have some screenshots of the in the next couple of weeks, so will definitely include that.
I'd use commas instead of dashes here "mobile - anywhere and anytime - " the first time I read it as mobile-anywhere and ...
Also, not sure about "love giving" as the tagline. That is pretty broad and ambiguous
Noted thanks, will fix replace the dashes with commas. The 'love giving' tagline is a play on the word Agape (from which Agapay is derived), which is greek for unconditional love.
Not bad, although feels a bit text-heavy! I felt myself wanting to scroll past the text and get to some demos/screenshots!
Thanks - Based on the feedback received, I will reduce the text once I have some screenshots to call out key features.