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Feedback on my landing page please.

https://privasim.com/

https://privasim.com/

submitted this linkon August 16, 2019
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    Some initial reactions:

    • What is a dapp? Many of your prospective users may know, but not everyone visiting your page will.
    • Your video is full of copyrighted music/content and internet memes, which comes off as unprofessional. Does that work with your intended audience?
    • I'm not getting who your target market it. Is it companies intending to educate/motivate users about privacy and somehow sell more stuff? If so, how does a simulator help that directly? If not, are you just selling the privacy simulator directly to end-users?
    • Your copy could use some editing. A couple of examples: "Simulations are great medium" should be "Simulations are a great medium". "A dapp shop and your saved dapps are always on the left side so people ..." Left side of what? This page?

    My high-level recommendation is to focus on the value you're providing. What is it, and why should someone trust you to provide it?